Tuesday, June 26, 2012
Build A Story World
Cross-culture—era
cont’d
Even when speaking the same language
there are so many areas that can create emotional stress from disrespect to
humor. On my first trip to a delicatessen I asked for smoked meat and was asked
what kind. I had no idea what he was talking about and tried to explain the
packages that you could boil in water and put in a sandwich. He looked at me as
if I was from another planet. Several months later I tried once again at
another place with different wording and received the same reaction. A tourist
from New York City overheard our conversation and told me to ask for pastrami.
It was an East Coast-West Coast difference, not country borders.
Now grocers’ stock different food from
all around the world and most situations do not even exist. But back then it startled me to realize
some of my basic familiar foods were no longer available. My cultural changes
were minor and often humorous, however, for displaced refugees the emotional
cost is staggering. I highly recommend the movie Green Dragon as an example of how life can be impacted.
Exercise
Optional
1. If you
decide to watch Green Dragon look for
the many ways that the arts bring hope and healing to both cultures involved.
Note that the beginning of the movie is in sub-titles until the language
barrier is overcome.
Exercise:
Pair your character with a stranger in a
cooking class where they are both trying to learn to make a specialty dish
foreign to both of them.
Share: What is the funniest incident?
Friday, June 22, 2012
Connect Maps
Summertime and the maps come out of drawers ready to plot
vacation travel. We customize a route connecting the dots of destination and
sightseeing. Everyone is anxious to get to our destination, however somewhere
along the route we realize we don’t all have the same expectations for when we
arrive. We agreed on the surface route, but not the underlying motives.
It’s not always the best scenario for travel relationships
but it’s a terrific opportunity to build tension within theme in our novels. As
we connect the emotional and goal dots between characters we add stress to
plotting the story route.
In her excellent book, Wild
Ink, Victoria Hanley differentiates between premise, message and theme. Premise
is “often used to refer to the
underpinnings of a particular world or milieu.” Theme is “a feature that runs through the novel.”
The message “must hold true for that
particular novel” and the subplot messages become mirror images that bring
the reader back to the main point. Dot to dot connects the emotional route.
The movie Penelope
has several excellent examples of sub-text communicating opposing message values
in dialogue and in actions. In particular Penelope’s mother, Jessica,
keeps telling her that she is not what she looks like, she is not her nose, rather
someone waiting to come out. Jessica really thinks she believes it herself.
However she also believes that the only way her daughter will be truly happy is
to meet society’s expectations of good looks and a good name and only through
this map configuration can Penelope’s curse be broken.
Jessica truly lovely her daughter but she is so fixated on a
one-route course that, even after the disfiguring curse is removed, she still
suggests more ways for Penelope to improve opportunities by her looks.
Journal Prompt:
Write a brief conversation between your protagonist and
someone he trusts completely where he realizes that this person has been
undermining all his efforts because ‘it’s for his own good’.
Share: Which has
the greater damage—the external situation or the emotional impact?
Labels:
Creative Writing Prompt,
Message,
Movie Penelope,
Story Maps,
Theme,
Wild Ink
Tuesday, June 19, 2012
Build A Story World
Cross-culture—era
Within the same era includes a similar
world history, science, medicine, possibly economics, technology, etc. but seen
through different perspectives. Culture to culture affects language
communication, social status, and vocational capabilities. It impacts
immigrants and emigrants whether for a brief sojourn, or a lifelong change. Did
a person willing travel to a foreign country for business or education, or are
they in a new country as refugees?
The series Off the Map took the medical genre and plunked it in a third world
environment. Three young doctors must learn how to be doctors without hospitals,
often without traditional medication, operate under adverse circumstances, and
learn to navigate a foreign culture without a vocabulary to communicate.
It is often surprising to find that even
simple habits need to be changed. When I first moved to the USA from Canada I
discovered ‘my tea’ was not sold on the west coast but on the east coast only.
I switched to coffee out of desperation for strong enough caffeine. A few years
later it showed up on my grocer’s shelf and I literally did a ‘commercial style’
shriek that startled everyone around me. No one understood why that tea made such a difference. It was such a
minor detail and yet provided a longtime familiar equilibrium to my mornings.
Exercise: Write up
a scene where your character has made either a state-to-state move within her
country, or perhaps a neighborhood move within a large city. Mark what changes
she finds amusing, or frustrating, or challenging.
Share: Which one
raises a level of tension for her?
Labels:
Change,
Communication,
Cross Culture,
Language,
Moving
Friday, June 15, 2012
Compose Metaphors
A tree is often used as a symbol or metaphor of growth and
life as we saw in the last sequence. However, in reverse, it can also impact
story by exposing lies and shadows. Fairy tales and folk tales are rich with
living images in all forms. Scriptures too remind us that choices spread beyond
immediate actions.
“For the creation was
subjected to futility, not of its own will but by the will of the one who
subjected it, in hope that the creation itself will be set free from its
bondage to decay.” Romans 8: 20-21 NRSV
In the opening of the movie Penelope, as the curse is laid upon the family for their refusal to
take responsibility for their actions, the tree is the courtyard falls into
immediate decay as well. Yet it doesn’t die. Instead it remains as a visual
image reminding the family and others of the curse. Even if they try to pretend
it doesn’t exist, the tree stands in judgment as a silent metaphor.
And it raises the question as to why are women willing to
marry into this family? Do they not believe in the curse or do they not care? What
metaphor warning could your character not see or acknowledge? Or what warning does she represent to
others? Silent metaphors woven into your setting can speak in volumes.
Journal Prompt:
Brainstorm a list of possible plants or trees, or other
growing vegetation that could be a metaphor for loss to your protagonist and
then be restored at the end of his ordeal.
Share: Which one
did you choose? Why
Labels:
Creative Writing Prompt,
Curses,
Fairy Tales,
Metaphors,
Penelope
Tuesday, June 12, 2012
Building a Story World
This environment can be by choice, by birth or by capture. For better
or for worse your character is tied to this place. For example, in the movie Phantom of the Opera everyone who
participates in the opera has a stake in giving good performances. Jobs and
reputations matter. Yet, there are a variety of mini-cultures within the
overall setting such as the behind the walls laundry room, carpenter shop and
stable. Some vocations may or may not ever communicate with one another.
Although I find labeling people to be derogatory there has been a
reason that so many high school based movies are divided by category names. It
introduces immediate conflict. One classroom alone can create its own
mini-world. The Breakfast Club is a
great example of characters being forced to examine and choose what mores will
define them within their cultural environment.
In The Hero and the Crown, by
Robin McKinley, Aerin, as a king’s daughter, has many privileges. At the
same time she has prescribed boundaries. As a princess she is not allowed to
cross royal protocol, especially when dealing with visitors or emissaries. Yet
even within those boundaries Aerin chose to cross culture with the people of
Damar, within and without the castle, regardless of income or status. She
treated all with respect and took the time to build communication and
relationships. Whereas her relative Galanna stood on her royal blood and
demanded everyone treat her “with the
greatest deference humanly possible.”
Exercise:
1.
Choose a boundary area in which your protagonist
did not have permission to cross as a teenager. Write up a brief situation in
which he submitted to the rule. And another brief situation in which he
deliberately broke it.
2.
What emotions did he experience as an
after-effect?
Share: Which emotional
version do you think is most effective for the situation you have your
character in now?
Friday, June 8, 2012
Mystery
"Where were
you when I laid the foundations of the earth ... when the morning stars sang
together?" God asks in Job 38:4,7.
The movie Tree of Life opens
with this quote and opens into yet another theme—timelessness. How
do we wrap our thoughts around this concept when the mystery eludes us and yet
it is a fact in our daily lives? Even when we attempt an answer it only leads
to more questions.
The movie repeats cycle themes, clouds crossing
the sky in time lapse, the birth of a volcano, the birth of a child; all are
measurable, all are timeless and all keep us open to mystery.
Jesus raised similar questions in His parables.
He began with daily measurable activities: sowing seeds, watching the weather,
harvests—cycle of life. Then He pushed beyond the surface to share hidden
truths. Powerful, creative, and life-changing insights. And the most common
immediate response to these metaphors was, “How is this possible?”
The questions, the search, the curiosity all
lead us into the mystery of living here and into hereafter. Nature wraps around
our daily lives as beacon and somehow as a guardian. It is bound up with our
ability to learn to see.
“For the anxious longing of creation waits eagerly for the
revealing of the sons of God.” Romans 8:22 NAS
Nature—timeless—expressions of God’s truth—mystery—open
to conversation.
Journal Prompt:
Make a list of nature metaphor or themes that reflect a
sense of timelessness to you. Choose one for your character and write a brief
vignette when he first experienced that connection.
Share: Two of your
metaphors.
Tuesday, June 5, 2012
Building A Story World
Mystery writer Elizabeth George says
that the details that show a person’s landscape “imprint an impression of a character in the reader’s mind.” The
external and internal are achieved through specific
and telling details. These are details with a message attached to them, the
kind of details that no reader forgets. She keeps a long list of jobs,
skills, learning opportunities and day-to-day actions at hand to keep her
characters real and grounded in daily life.
I’ve picked out a few from her sample
list that would be considered common across cultures and at the same time with
completely diverse possibilities. Think of them in relationship to different
species too. Here’s a brief sampling of categories she and her students
developed: eating a meal, cooking a meal, building a campfire, drinking, doing
laundry, getting a tattoo, fishing, moving, building a structure, sculpting,
knitting, cleaning, catching a lizard, and going through photographs.
Exercise: Pick an
activity that can be both personal and an art form, such as food dishes, or
weaving, or photography, and use it to track possibilities through the
following culture connections.
Here are three potential culture worlds
to explore for communication and atmosphere.
1. Cross-culture—within
the same environment.
2. Cross-culture—within
the same era.
3. Cross-culture—across
time dimension.
Share: Which cross-culture did you
choose and why?
Labels:
Atmosphere,
Creative Writing Prompt,
Cross Culture,
Culture
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