Thursday, May 2, 2019
Words With Impact: Direct Language Echoes
Workshop:
Discover Words That Sing
“Choose a
particular item or activity and make that the object of the language search.
Find out as much as possible about the language associated with that object,
especially active and concrete verbs, the history of the names used for that
object, and terminology that seems especially colorful. Then save from your
search a list of nouns, a list of verbs and a list of adjectives.” James
McKean
Memory
holds our emotional reservoir, both personal and public. Some memories are
buried so deep that we don’t recognize them when they echo in the present. We
have a fleeting pang or touch of comfort, and wonder why. We need these echoes
to help us bridge understanding and communication with others. Regardless of
language or status we immediately connect, or recognize, the joy of a newborn
child or the grief of a death.
When
we recognize an object as an echo for ourselves, or a character, we can dig
deep to search out an unexpected perspective that can strengthen our emotional
vocabulary with ordinary words.
James McKean’s suggestion above is a
variation on the list poem as well as a general search for key metaphoric and
rich words. The first run may or may not contain usable words, but by doing so
you’ll spark imagination. And/or you may discover just what you needed for a
particular sentence or detail.
Here’s
an example of one word I searched just on the surface. I didn’t take his next
step of research on this. Dividing the nouns, verbs and adjectives gave me
sufficient material for my needs at that time.
Word=Compass
Nouns Verbs Adjectives
arc enclose curved
spatial
position draw navigational
instrument determine indicator
directional
device pivot magnetic
circular
cord ‘moveable
rigid legs
hinged at
the end’
I
ended up with fifteen words to choose from. The next word I choose to search
was navigate for which I ended up with thirty-six words.
To
my surprise I was actually able to incorporate the moveable rigid legs.
Action
Steps:
1. Write your own opening to the Titanic using another focus. Or choose
another movie’s silent image that has captured a memory for you or your
character.
2. What echo becomes enhanced? What echo
disappears? Apply the same technique to a new scene in your novel.
Share:
What emotional echo surprised you?
Read deep, marcy
Labels:
Creative Writing Prompt,
Direct Language,
Discover Words That Sing,
Echoes,
Eight Communication Basics,
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